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Mirror, mirror
on the wall
who is the fairest of them all?

You are

Not this girl
who looks back at you
Oh no this can't be true

All I see is a girl with acne for skin
Ghostly thin
With too short hair
and an icy stare

Mirror, mirror
on the wall
who is the fairest of them all?

Oh girl
so foolish girl
I don't see all that on the outside
but you have beauty within


What do you mean beauty within?
All I do is sin
I'm good for nothing

You have kindness in your heart
you put others before you, right from the start
Others see you as beautiful
Don't you see?


I don't see
What I see is me
A girl with acne for skin
Ghostly thin
With too short hair
and an icy stare

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder
Don't you see?
:iconforeststone:
For :iconpenpa:'s Contest "Beauty in the Eye of the Beholder"
Here is the link to the Journal: [link] (where the contest is)
How it fits: I had another poem for this (which I'll upload later) then I thought of Snow White (I just watched Snow White and the Hunstmen) and how the mirror see's the beuaty of the queen and Snow White's beauty inside her heart and it truly shows beuaty in the eye of the beholder.

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Mood: Love ~ShazzyBear Sep 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I enjoyed the link to the fairy tale, and the modern day, it mad it so dreamy and nice, and then woke you up: if what I said makes sense :-s
I really enjoyed it! ;)
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*Foreststone Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks and I understood what you said!
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:iconjana3gd:
that's great
oh weally wish, I could write such poems
it is amazing
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*Foreststone Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much....your comment made my day! :blush:
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*Foreststone Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:lol:
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