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The tears roll down her face. She has finally given in to the sorrow…
The mask comes off, and the tears wash away the fake smile
The tears that she has been holding back finally get to flow out
She finally let's people see how hurt she is
To see that she is falling apart
To see that she isn't happy go lucky, but a sad, lost in this world girl
She showed her true colors to the world
Everyone was surprised by the outburst, but understanding because they too know how it feels to hold back tears.
The mask comes off, and the tears wash away the fake smile
The tears that she has been holding back finally get to flow out
She finally let's people see how hurt she is
To see that she is falling apart
To see that she isn't happy go lucky, but a sad, lost in this world girl
She showed her true colors to the world
Everyone was surprised by the outburst, but understanding because they too know how it feels to hold back tears.
I don't think this is very good, in my opinion but who knows 
. Critiques are welcome.
Also I've had this happen to me and it's so not fun
Please do not steal my artwork
(C) Forestone aka Jenna V
. Critiques are welcome. Also I've had this happen to me and it's so not fun
Please do not steal my artwork
(C) Forestone aka Jenna V
© 2010 - 2024 Foreststone
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Sweet poem! 